F'O - Evaluation

Question 1,2,3 & 6

JP - Evaluation

RD: Evaluation

Evaluation 1

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Evaluation 2

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Evaluation 3

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Evaluation 6 FINAL

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FL - Evaluation

Evaluation - 1, 2, 3 and 6 

 

 

Evaluation - 4 and 5 

Evaluation - 7



Final stabalised film

 

Group: Final Production

RD: Feedback

RD: Feedback

Strengths

• Flesh Title impressive and exciting.
• Continuous, makes sense.
• Different storyline, it has an unexpected twist.
• Good use of music throughout, raises tension well.
• Good sound effect of knife.
• Titles clear, but don't distract from action.
• Very good contrast between the usual and the unusual, cooking dinner and keeping people.
• It makes you want to watch on to find out what will happen to the victims and why the antagonists are doing this.
• Nice uses of close up on meat and newspaper.
• Good relationship between the two lead actors.

Weaknesses

• Music too quiet in the second scene.
• Flesh title should be at the very end.
• The first title looks a bit wobbly shaky.
• The two tracking shots are quiet long, and of the same place so it looks strange that they are so close together.
• Chain rattling sound in the kitchen scene doesn't sound right.
• You can hear a voice when zooming in on the newspaper, which isn't supposed to be there.