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RD: Feedback
RD: Feedback
Strengths
Strengths
- Flesh Title impressive and exciting.
- Continuous, makes sense.
- Different storyline, it has an unexpected twist.
- Good use of music throughout, raises tension well.
- Good sound effect of knife.
- Titles clear, but don't distract from action.
- Very good contrast between the usual and the unusual, cooking dinner and keeping people.
- It makes you want to watch on to find out what will happen to the victims and why the antagonists are doing this.
- Nice uses of close up on meat and newspaper.
- Good relationship between the two lead actors.
- Music too quiet in the second scene.
- Flesh title should be at the very end.
- The first title looks a bit wobbly shaky.
- The two tracking shots are quiet long, and of the same place so it looks strange that they are so close together.
- Chain rattling sound in the kitchen scene doesn't sound right.
- You can hear a voice when zooming in on the newspaper, which isn't supposed to be there.
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