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RD: Feedback

RD: Feedback

Strengths
  • Flesh Title impressive and exciting.
  • Continuous, makes sense.
  • Different storyline, it has an unexpected twist.
  • Good use of music throughout, raises tension well.
  • Good sound effect of knife.
  • Titles clear, but don't distract from action.
  • Very good contrast between the usual and the unusual, cooking dinner and keeping people.
  • It makes you want to watch on to find out what will happen to the victims and why the antagonists are doing this.
  • Nice uses of close up on meat and newspaper.
  • Good relationship between the two lead actors.
Weaknesses
  • Music too quiet in the second scene.
  • Flesh title should be at the very end.
  • The first title looks a bit wobbly shaky.
  • The two tracking shots are quiet long, and of the same place so it looks strange that they are so close together.
  • Chain rattling sound in the kitchen scene doesn't sound right.
  • You can hear a voice when zooming in on the newspaper, which isn't supposed to be there.

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