Group: Final Film Opening

F.L - Feedback

Strengths:

• Good storyline, with an unusual concept. 
• Wide range of shots and angels, and good tracking shot at the beginning of the film. 
• Establishing shots work well at the start.
• The extreme close-up shots are good, like the ECU of the meat cooking in the pan.
• The titles work well with the action - they're significant enough to be noticed, yet don't detract from the action on screen.
• Tension is built well at the ending towards the run up to the 'FLESH' title.

Weaknesses:

• Some unsubtle shots that detract from continuity, for example, the shot with the hat being taken off.
• The two different low angle shots of the feet going up the stairs at the start and end are unnecessary, and maybe we only need one shot of this. 
• Too much noise when he starts to go down into the basement, with the close up on the newspaper. 

F.O'C: Feedback

Strengths:

• The soundtrack works well
• Intercutting the newspaper wall with the kitchen scene was effective
• Very atmospheric going down into the basement
• Excellent range of shots
• Close ups of news paper walls are good
• Nice opening sequence & establishing shots
• Good lighting in the basement
• Great make-up on the victims

Weaknesses:

• The part with the chain rattle which leads Rob into the basement is unclear. A different sound was recommended.
• Some bits (towards the end of the kitchen scene and the middle of the basement scene) need more sound adding to them as they're rather quiet.
• Rob's voice echoes slightly on the close up of Kath's face.